How does where I live influence how I live
My hometown is Ulsan. Because of school, now I'm living in Seoul. Living in Seoul influences me a lot. First, since I live far away with my parents, I feel independent. Still my parents help me a lot, but there are many things I have to do myself. Housework is the example. when I lived with my parents, my mom do most of housework but now I have to wash the dishes, do the laundry and clean my house. Second, there are lots of things to do in Seoul. Seoul is much bigger than Ulsan. There are many chances to do something. For example most of famous art exhibition are held in Seoul. Recently, in Seoul I went to Henrik Vibskov art exhibition. In Ulsan, I didn't have chance to go famous art exhibitions. So it was the first time for me to go such a famous art exhitbition. Finally, Seoul provides me many good places to play. Ulsan is an industrial city so it doesn't have many place to tour. On the other hand, Seoul have big and beautiful parks, traditional house in Hanok town, Han river, and Cheonggyecheon Stream etc. In short, my present residence Seoul influences my life a lot.
Dear Moonju,
답글삭제I was impressed by your writing, because it remind me Seoul life as you. I am from Jeunju and I also live alone in Seoul. Thus, I can exactly understand what you want to say in your paragraph. You focused on how Seoul life influenced you, but I wrote about focused on Jeunju life. If you are interested in my writing, please come to my blog and read it. I guess, you can understand me a lot. Additionally, I think you have clear, detailed and concise sentences.
Have a nice day!
Jiyon