2015년 9월 26일 토요일

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Riverside In My Hometown


     The place for me to concentrate is riverside in my hometown which named as Taehwa river. When I was high school student, there was riverside on my way to school. Usually I took a bus, but sometimes I walked. When I had problems with study or concerns of university entrance, I walked through the riverside and I was consoled by that river. It’s like a Hanriver. But it’s width and length is smaller than Han river. Beside the river, there is a trail. When I keep going through the trail, there also has a  green and dense bamboo grove. When I went to the bamboo grove, I could feel peace of nature. In spring, rape flowers are in full bloom along the trail. Deep yellow flowers made me feel like returning to the innocence of childhood. It makes wonderful view. In addition, the weather is good, the sky is blue and cloud looks awesome. It makes me feel completely happy. Also, there is a bridge. I had to go through the bridge to go to school. It was on the river so wind was blew so much. It was too cold in winter but it was so good to walk in other seasons. Thanks to the riverside on the way of school, I could think deeply of my problems, think back, and think of my future.  
 
 

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  2. Hi Moon-Ju.

    When I read your paragraph, I can imagine Taehwa-river. Taehwa is beautiful place. It's like view of movie scene I like. Sometime,I walk beside of river or nature place when I have complex idea. It's good paragraph, but I think you have to write more sentence describing place. You focused view of Taehwa of four season. I want concrete describing.

    Have a nice day.
    Jung Gwang Jun.

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