Opinion Paragraph

Should government abolish statute of limitations(공소시효)?

 

 

In my opinion, government should abolish statute of limitations. First of all, the realization of a just society is not available. If statute of limitations continues, we cannot punish the pass evil deed. Basically person who committed a crime should be punish. They infringed on other’s human right. According to Korean constitution article 10, all citizens shall be assured of their human worth and dignity and shall have the right to pursue happiness. People who injured other person arrogated other’s right to pursue happiness. They should be punished by law. A second reason is that abolishing statute of limitations can assure punishment of criminal. Victims and their families will feel anxious and uneasy. By punishing criminals, victims and their families can be compensated their resentment. For example, in 1998, in Daegue one girl whose name is Eunhee Jeong was hit by truck and died. Her family said there is a evidence that she was suffered from a sex crime, but it was ignored because of the lack of evidence. After 15 years, in 2013, police found the criminal. Finally the fact that she suffered from a sex crime was proved. However, Criminal couldn't be punished because of the statute of limitation. Third, by abolishing statute of limitations, Government can prevent abuse of statute of limitations. Abolishing statute of limitation recognize to criminal that they cannot avoid punishment if they committed a crime. According to the National Police, from 2008 to 2012 there are 719,530 crimes which are expired by Statute of limitations. Criminals know that if they conceal themselves while period of statute of limitation, they will be not punished. Therefore they abuse the system. For example, there are a woman who killed her husband and hid her crime. Fortunately for police and victim, she had her collar felt by police 25 days before the expiration date of statute of limitation. For these three reasons, I think government should abolish statute of limitations.

 

 

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[1] Wikipedia. (2015, Augest 11). 대한민국 헌법 제 10조. Retrieved from

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD_%ED%97%8C%EB%B2%95_%EC%A0%9C10%EC%A1%B0

 

[2] Kim Dongpil. (2015, Augest 30). ‘그것이 알고 싶다’ 공소시효 덫에 빠진 대구 여대생 살인사건… 결국 ‘무죄’. Retrieved from

http://news.kmib.co.kr/article/view.asp?arcid=0009802402&code=61171811&cp=nv

 

[3] Lee Euntaek. (2013, December 4). 15년 공소시효 25일 남기고 前남편 살해 들통. Retrieved from

 http://news.naver.com/main/read.nhn?mode=LSD&mid=sec&sid1=102&oid=020&aid=0002501661

 

 

 

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1. 2008~2012년 공소시효가 만료된 범죄현황 - the National Police. (2015, December ). Retrieved from

http://news.naver.com/main/read.nhn?mode=LSD&mid=sec&sid1=102&oid=020&aid=0002501661

 

 

 

Blog Post #5

Has your own experience from the blog writing changed your understanding of knowledge production and/or knowledge ownership? Please briefly explain.

Writing my paragraph on my blog has changed my understanding of knowledge production and knowledge ownership. First, in case of knowledge production, when I just wrote my paragraph through paper, I didn’t keep my paper well. I always lost it. However, by writing my paragraph on to my blog, I don’t have to keep my paper. The only one I have to keep is my Google account. I like it because it can be my portfolio for my writing. Furthermore, through my blog, I can see my mistakes I usually had through other friend’s comments. Second, I didn’t know exactly about knowledge ownership. I only wrote citation when I wrote report for my assignment. Through blog posting, I knew that I have to use all of citation if the knowledge is from outside source. I actually learned about concept of citation. Blog posting gave me both understanding of knowledge production and knowledge ownership

 

Blog post #4

1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?

When I wrote my paragraph, I usually check whether there are some errors. However, sometimes I couldn't find my error, others comment to my blog and taught me about the error. In case of important paragraph such as Midterm paragraph, we have to send our final draft to our teacher. This comment corrects our mistakes, so our score can get better. In addition, comments sometimes found me a better expression. When I wrote a Midterm paragraph, someone from other class came to my blog and told me a better expression than my sentence. I thought her expression was better and I corrected it and I liked it too.

 

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?

At first, I just wrote about others paragraph topic. For example, if someone wrote about a beauty of Seoul, I expressed empathy or added my opinion about that topic. Recieving others comments on my blog, I thought it is better to check their writing. I knew that the feedback I got is more valuable. In addition, watching others blog, there are many students who wrote their paragraph well. I was inspired by them a lot and realized that I have to upgrade my paragraph more.

 

Class Review

This is my class review for Oct 30th,2015.

Class review EW2-035 from Moonju1

Mid-Term Exam Paragraph

Water: Cheap Medicine

                                                                                                                                                  

                                                                                                                                                   EW2-035

                                                                                                                                                 14010218

                                                                                                                                               Lee Moonju

 Drinking 2 liters of water a day provides health benefits in these ways. First, It clears up our skin. There was a Korean TV program 'miracle of a glass of water' which conducted experiment about observing people who drinks 2 liters of water. It showed the effects of drinking water realistically. According to this program, we can see lots of positive influence of drinking water. Lack of moisture makes our skin get dry. It leads to a result of accelerating aging process. Drinking water provides moisture to our skin, so it helps anti-aging. When we drink water, it makes our body wastes excrete from our body. It prevents skin trouble appearing.  Person who participate in this experiment said that her red face got brighten after she had drunk 2 liters of water. Furthermore, other person who had atopy told that his atopy got better. Second, Drinking water improves our intestine(장) health. If we drink water in the morning before eating breakfast, smooth bowel movement(배변 운동) is available. Drinking water in the morning helps enterokinesia(장 운동) promote. It is also good to people who have constipation(변비). Finally, it can be also helpful to the people who are going on a diet. Water which is drunk before having a meal makes dieter feel full. Dieter will eat less food than usual because of satiety. It prevents overeating and chokes back of appetite. In addition, according to K water, drinking water while exercising helps recovery of muscles nerve and quenching thirst. For these reasons, it is clear that drinking 2 liters of water a day is a good habit.

 

Reference

1)  SBS스페셜 물한잔의 기적. Retrieved from http://blog.naver.com/tamatas/100201363504 on October 16, 2015

2) 건강한 물. Retrieved from http://m.kwater.or.kr/info/sub01/healthPage.do?s_mid=1589 on October 16, 2015 

 

3) image: BASF - 우리가 만드는 화학으로 - 물. Retrieved from http://we-create-chemistry.basf.com/ko/resources-environment-climate/water on October 16, 2015

 

Descriptive paragraph

Riverside In My Hometown

     The place for me to concentrate is riverside in my hometown which named as Taehwa river. When I was high school student, there was riverside on my way to school. Usually I took a bus, but sometimes I walked. When I had problems with study or concerns of university entrance, I walked through the riverside and I was consoled by that river. It’s like a Hanriver. But it’s width and length is smaller than Han river. Beside the river, there is a trail. When I keep going through the trail, there also has a  green and dense bamboo grove. When I went to the bamboo grove, I could feel peace of nature. In spring, rape flowers are in full bloom along the trail. Deep yellow flowers made me feel like returning to the innocence of childhood. It makes wonderful view. In addition, the weather is good, the sky is blue and cloud looks awesome. It makes me feel completely happy. Also, there is a bridge. I had to go through the bridge to go to school. It was on the river so wind was blew so much. It was too cold in winter but it was so good to walk in other seasons. Thanks to the riverside on the way of school, I could think deeply of my problems, think back, and think of my future.  

 

 

Blog Post #1

How does where I live influence how I live

 

 

 My hometown is Ulsan. Because of school, now I'm living in Seoul. Living in Seoul influences me a lot. First, since I live far away with my parents, I feel independent. Still my parents help me a lot, but there are many things I have to do myself. Housework is the example. when I lived with my parents, my mom do most of housework but now I have to wash the dishes, do the laundry and clean my house. Second, there are lots of things to do in Seoul. Seoul is much bigger than Ulsan. There are many chances to do something. For example most of famous art exhibition are held in Seoul. Recently, in Seoul I went to Henrik Vibskov art exhibition. In Ulsan, I didn't have chance to go famous art exhibitions. So it was the first time for me to go such a famous art exhitbition. Finally, Seoul provides me many good places to play. Ulsan is an industrial city so it doesn't have many place to tour. On the other hand, Seoul have big and beautiful parks, traditional house in Hanok town, Han river, and Cheonggyecheon Stream etc. In short, my present residence Seoul influences my life a lot.